08-03-2021, 09:14 PM
You have improved quite a bit since your last application in my opinion. I think that most of these issues are things that come with age and with a bit of extra responsibility thrown onto you I believe that you could continue to grow. However, I am going to remain neutral on this application. Your efforts aren't going unnoticed, but there is also definitely some room to grow. Just continue to keep working and take criticism from this application to improve in ways that you may not have thought you needed to. I wish you the best of luck!
